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00:06	All right , very good . I want you to
00:17	turn your page . Turn your book to page 279
00:25	. Yeah . Mhm . Page 279 at the top
00:36	. It says expanding with modifiers . We just spoke
00:40	about modifiers how the adjectives modify . What ? What
00:44	did the adjective modified the now ? All right .
00:47	So we're using modifiers . My modifiers are words and
00:50	phrases that tell more about or modify the meaning of
00:54	other words . My modifiers can make sentences growth sentences
00:58	stronger by adding important details . Notice how the modifiers
01:01	change the following sentences and simply just like the ones
01:04	we did yesterday when we said , well what is
01:06	the sentence that we came ? What is the same
01:08	as you came up with yesterday ? I actually see
01:10	it . It said we ran and saw a deer
01:15	running around . All right . So we added modestly
01:17	ran and saw deer running around . We added modified
01:19	to that to make it stronger . Same thing I
01:21	watched the bus leave . How did they add modify
01:23	us to make this ? Make the sentence a little
01:27	stronger . It's stronger but it's only a little stronger
01:29	. What is the second one say ? I watched
01:34	the last bus leave um And the 3rd sentence .
01:45	Okay , what is the difference in the two ?
01:49	Actually ? What's the difference in the three ? What's
01:51	the difference between the first one and the second sentence
01:56	? So what do you think is what do you
01:57	think is the difference between the first sentence and the
02:00	second sentence ? The first and the second sentence .
02:03	The first sentence has its okay , but second sentence
02:06	as a little detail so it helps the reader not
02:10	just know that the person caught wasn't waited for watched
02:13	by bus leave , but the last bus that gives
02:16	it a little more meaning . Yes . I don't
02:18	know if anybody's ever called the bus , but it's
02:20	it's a terrible feeling to watch the very last was
02:23	leave . That means you got to find another way
02:24	to get to wherever you're going . All right .
02:26	What is it ? What is the difference between that
02:28	sentence and the sentence following that one , Jessica .
02:34	Um , it's the last the second and the last
02:38	one shows that he was probably running . That person
02:42	was probably running waiting for the bus and actually laughed
02:46	adds more detail as a lot more detail . It
02:50	helps the reader understand something that that person is actually
02:54	going through . Yes , It's a big difference for
02:56	saying . Or I watched the last bus leave and
02:59	then come in and saying , gasping for breath .
03:01	I watched the last bus leave from the parking lot
03:03	. All right . So it's it's a lot more
03:05	detail . It's a stronger sentence . These are the
03:08	sentences we should write . That's why when you give
03:10	me a sentence yesterday , like we ran And so
03:13	you know who gave me one yesterday ? Said something
03:15	about ? It was a big it was a big
03:19	what was it ? I saw the big brown deer
03:23	. All right . I think we could do a
03:25	little better than the big brown deer . Alright .
03:27	One way is we're adding um adjectives . All right
03:30	. We're gonna try to have some more descriptive adjectives
03:33	, right ? That are more so on our level
03:35	. All right . What I'm gonna do what we're
03:37	gonna do is go over . We're gonna I'm gonna
03:39	let you and your group modify these few sentences .
03:43	And then we're gonna modify our post card and turn
03:47	it into a short letter . The postcard we wrote
03:49	yesterday . We're gonna make that into a short letter
03:51	. But right now , I'm gonna give you a
03:52	sheet of um Chart Paper . Group one . This
03:57	is what we'll do . Group one . You'll do
03:59	group You'll do sentence number two at the bottom .
04:02	Uh Your group to You'll do send this number three
04:06	. Group four . You'll do sentence number no .
04:09	Group three . You'll do sentence number four . Group
04:12	four . You'll do sentence number five will do sentence
04:14	number one together . All right . We'll just send
04:17	us number one together . Right , okay . I'm
04:22	sorry . You know . Yes . Somebody recently wants
04:31	them for me please . Well , you know ,
04:35	I can't write it that fast . The concert was
04:49	held outdoors . Yes . Yeah . The concert was
04:55	held outdoors . I want to grow this sentence first
05:02	first with by adding adjectives . Just by adding adjectives
05:07	. Alright , just by adding adjectives , we're not
05:09	gonna add anything to the beginning , middle or end
05:12	. Right now just by adding adjectives , I want
05:14	you to just discuss it with your group . What
05:16	you think would be the best some of the best
05:18	adjectives to add to this sentence to help you grow
05:21	. A little think of your think of your favorite
05:24	group you want to see and that concert . Yeah
05:28	. Okay . You are crazy . A thing of
05:31	each question . Each question that the adjectives answer they
05:38	come to . Wasn't but Okay . What do you
05:53	do ? I think it's more kind . It's not
05:56	a secret . I a affectionate thanks . I don't
06:11	love affection . It would be the best . Yeah
06:14	, I understand what you're going with , but I
06:16	don't know about affectionate . Come on . I'm only
06:20	gonna give you another another men and a half .
06:23	You already ready ? I just want to do with
06:26	it . I think we've got a beautiful outdoor .
06:33	Okay . I'd actually like to do it in a
06:35	different color marker . Thank you . Okay , they
06:43	they know you guys gave me the first . All
06:47	right . All right . What do you have ?
06:49	The fantastic concert ? Mhm . Mhm . Mhm .
07:02	Go ahead . What can I say that ? Yes
07:07	. Yes . What's out in the beautiful outdoors ?
07:13	Yeah . You guys the long belong . Yeah .
07:28	Mhm . Mindless behavior . Yes . Mhm . Mhm
07:43	. Mhm . Concert yes was held . Yeah .
07:51	Mhm . Okay . I showed him guess was held
07:57	right . Mhm . Outdoor and the great outdoors .
08:02	Yes . Mhm . Yes . You know . Mhm
08:12	. Would you guys , would you guys come up
08:13	with you have them ? The noisy mama's behavior ?
08:17	Say it one more time . The noisy yes .
08:26	Yes . Say . Okay . Mhm . All right
08:33	. Oh mindless behavior . Right . Is everybody like
08:37	a fantasy except except the boys ? Right . That's
08:49	okay . You heard a new addition you heard in
08:52	addition ? Yeah . Candy girl . Like all the
08:57	girls like them . I like them too . But
09:01	I couldn't say I like them . So it's probably
09:05	the same thing . I like them now I go
09:06	to the shows now . the noisy , mindless behavior
09:12	Speak up . Mhm . Concert What ? That's it
09:18	was held outdoors ? What's hell outdoors ? Yeah .
09:23	123 and lastly you think the reckless black eyed peas
09:32	concert ? No . Mhm . The reckless yeah .
09:43	Is it Black eye peas ? Black eyed is I'd
09:49	with you ? Sure sure actually had that the reckless
09:57	black eyed peas concert was held in the humid outdoors
10:06	. That's a little different from what you guys well
10:08	know I didn't get yours that's what it was .
10:11	Concert was held in the humid outdoors . All right
10:22	. Yeah . So . Mhm . Okay very good
10:32	. I asked you that I asked you to um
10:34	add adjectives tomato basically the modified announcing his sentence .
10:38	The concert was held outdoors first . You would have
10:41	to know what the now ones were . I think
10:46	let me see . 12 three for three out of
10:52	the four . Actually modified the now sounds alright .
10:56	Which sentence ? Which which sentence is one of the
11:00	now is not modified Ni Asia . Which 1 ?
11:03	What do you think ? Group two sectors outdoors .
11:08	What does it say ? It says the noisy mind
11:10	behavior concert was held outdoors . The noisy mindless behavior
11:14	concert was held outdoors denounce here were what I said
11:19	the towns or what concert outdoors to make to grow
11:25	that sentence . To build it to make it a
11:28	little more interesting to give a little more information at
11:31	a little more detail to it . You should have
11:34	modified both concert . I really don't know what kind
11:38	of concert it was . Uh And I know it
11:41	was held outdoors . You know I guess that's pretty
11:44	cool . The concert was held outdoors . This the
11:47	fantastic concert was held in the beautiful outdoors . That's
11:51	what I get a whole different picture between this one
11:54	and this one . Yes . it's a little more
11:56	gives a little more to the reader . The long
11:59	, mindless behavior constant was held in the great outdoors
12:03	. Very good sentence . This makes me think they
12:05	went a little too much . Like you really didn't
12:08	enjoy yourself that much . It was long . That's
12:10	why that's how I say it . I may be
12:12	wrong . All right . The noisy mindless behavior concert
12:15	. Very good . It was noisy . Was held
12:17	outdoors , should have a little something about the outdoors
12:20	. Right ? And lastly , the reckless back .
12:23	The reckless , it was reckless . I don't know
12:26	what they did . That was so reckless . I
12:28	don't know something media . It's up to you to
12:31	it's something you to continue talking about . But the
12:33	reckless black eyed peas , Black eyed peas Concert was
12:36	held in the human outdoors doesn't sound like the like
12:39	these guys had a great time . All right ,
12:42	Alright . But all are very good with all a
12:45	very good actually . That's good as well . But
12:46	next time you guys would definitely have to do what
12:50	modify the other now .

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6th grade lesson on using adjectives to modify nouns. This is part of ESE's Calibration Video Library, which provides MA districts with a video training tool to support evaluator calibration around observations and feedback.

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