As you probably know, Return of the Giant Superhero is definitely not a
once in a lifetime experience, and viewing it in your theater did nothing
to improve how mediocre this movie is. First of all, I was disappointed to
see that you screened the film in the smallest of your six theaters.
Although only 16 of the 50 seats in the theater were filled, this is a movie
intended for a large auditorium and the largest screen possible. I’m sure I
would have enjoyed the film much more if I had watched it in a larger
room.
What should the writer focus on when editing this paragraph?
A) Using question marks appropriately
B) Eliminating first-person pronouns (Correct Answer)
C) Checking spelling
D) Avoiding run on sentences
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